Comments on: What Writers Can Learn From Sally’s Dart Shop

By: charline sampres

charline sampres — Wed, 08 Sep 2010 13:25:47 +0000

This article make me realize that even i dont writing i don’t half to hate it because.When i write a good paper I feel good about my self, because.The more I write the better i get, and it’s better for me because , when I get to the unniversity it’s going to be hard for me, if i don’t star practicing now so i could get better. am going to have a problem.

By: Yailin Rodriguez

Yailin Rodriguez — Wed, 08 Sep 2010 04:23:41 +0000

i did like this essay because is really intresting and organice. it also has alot of illustration patterns that makes intresting to read. i also like what the writter said to never give up writting that is not hard you just have your inspiration to come.

By: Blanca Roque

Blanca Roque — Fri, 03 Sep 2010 14:42:12 +0000

Oh,yes,in a certain way.I enjoy writing.Specially, when I am writing about myself.Because,I feel free to say,what I think.Writing, for me is so important and give the writer many opportunities of express his ideas.Eventhough, it is so difficult for me,make a time to write.I enjoy while I am writing.

On my opinion this essay follows the tradicional structure and is very well organize.

By: Gloria

Gloria — Sun, 21 Feb 2010 21:54:56 +0000

Oh, so true. There are times when the words just come spilling out of me, and there are times when sitting down to write regularly happens by accident. Like finding your website and trying my first Word Shot. Well, it’s become a habit now. A good one.

I don’t fault myself when I’m not writing regularly, though. Because when I do write, It’s generally more inspired, then when I have to force myself to. But that’s not always true. The point is, whether I am writing from inspiration, and it lands on the paper effortlessly, like a leaf falling from a tree, or I’m intrigued by a someone’s blog post, and I comment–and it becomes a blog post of its own–the fact is, I’m writing.

And the truth is, I do write every day, even though it may not be “formal”.

So, there you go.

By: Yasnai Formoso

Yasnai Formoso — Thu, 11 Feb 2010 14:15:16 +0000

This essay was well organized, this is a very touching story, I can somewhat relate to her story.

By: lisset chacon

lisset chacon — Thu, 21 Jan 2010 23:05:51 +0000

I like darts for a 5 minute adrenaline, to take my anger out, as or a career, thats intense. Anything that you dicipline yourself everyday can have speedbumps in the way just like writing, writing can have speedbumps but its a form of expression. I think this story inspired me to write more in Salinas writing class…l.o.l

By: victor

victor — Wed, 20 Jan 2010 23:24:05 +0000

interesting lecture. I agree with gary

By: Yanny Fragoso

Yanny Fragoso — Tue, 19 Jan 2010 21:22:54 +0000

This essay is very well organize starting with a topic sentence following with a thesis statements giving details on what is the difference between writing and enjoy something . The we have a hook which is telling what the woman do in the store and so on. On the first paragraph she start to compare writing with how the woman loved the darts, and so on very good details. In the conclusion there are very good advices and her opinion.

By: Steve Osborne

Steve Osborne — Sat, 15 Nov 2008 15:54:15 +0000

Thanks, Gary.